James the Greatest (jtggodqos) wrote in ravagedroses,
James the Greatest
jtggodqos
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red skid marks on the bedroom floor
a sign of secrets behind locked doors
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I don't think the word "result" fits. Wrong scansion.
would be a perfect couplet otherwise. Dark. Should be for the community I suppose. The time makes me nervous.
Why does the time make you nervous?

And I can't seem to think of a synonym.